Yesterday was probably the worst day of my life, oh sorry my name is Jesse And I am going to talk about yesterday,well it started in music. I got called up to sing on the modelater and he said that my song was good. He called Gladys Armstrong Iris and then the trouble started when the to Boys came up.I kind of wish I was them, they got to miss every lesson doing sums so ja and then school finally ended I went home and to find out that my moms friends brother was coming for dinner I thought that he was going to be very young and when he got there he looked like an ugly old man and she told him,and I got sent to bed Without the rest of my dinner and even jelly.
The man does seem very rude! It's a very nice story Georgia. I'm glad I wasn't there. I don't think adults should treats children like that.
ReplyDeleteGeorgia that poem is as awesome as you . I did like the way you described you moms friends brother. I cant believe you went to bed without jelly. Jelly is the best part about dinner. But anyway I loved your poem and a great amount of grammar.
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